Under Personal Code, "know its" should be "know it's", and "you or friends'" should be "you or your friends'". 5, Complications: Under Crazy, insert "but" before "good luck". 4-5, General Perks: Under Daredevil, insert a semicolon ( ) between "half" and "however". 4, Skills: In the third paragraph, change "sworcery" to "sorcery". 3, About this Book: In the third paragraph, either replace "While" with "Pages", or replace "magic. He or she runs the adventure, acts as impartial judge, and helps keep the game moving." 3, Definitions of Common Game Terms: Replace the Game Master entry with: "Game Master (GM): The person in charge, sometimes called the narrator. In the second paragraph, insert "of" after "labor". 2, Foreword: Authors Phil Morris and Ray Nolan state, "Unfortunately we didn't have any time left over to learn how to write properly." Few of your errors are truly serious, sirs, but next time please find a nitpicker like me to proofread the text before it goes to press rather than apologizing for the lack. The Bare Bones Edition is available as a free PDF at: Mini Six is an OpenD6 variant published by Antipaladin Games.
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